Dear Mark Zuckerberg, My Name Is Quang And Im 11 Years Old. Im In Grade 5 At Major Ballachey School.
I Am Writing To You Because Joseph Kony Is A Bad Person And Every One Needs Your Support We Look up To You. This Is What I Know About Invisible Children Kony Takes Kids From There Family And Makes Them Kill There Loved Ones, Children In Africa Only Can Sleep For 2/3 Cause They Don’t Want To Be Taken From Kony So They Leave To Places A lot Kony Joseph Uses Children In Africa As A Secret Weapon
At School We Have Been Learning About Quality Of Life These Are 3 Things That I Have That Invisible Children Don’t , Freedom. House. Education.
There Here Are Just Three Rights From The UN Convention on the Rights of Children That The Invisible Children Are Denied.
To Eat Because Kony Doesn’t Wanna Feed 1,000 Kids Per A Day , Goto School Because There To Poor To Goto School, Have A Family Kony Usually Takes Them From There Family
This Is How You Can Help, Donate Or Make Konys Story Famous So We Get More Supports And Take Kony Down! Hope To Get Back From You Soon!
Sincerely, Quang Huynh
Excellent, even though you copied and pasted the letter from Corel it was very well done. You talked about why Mark should help Invisible Children, and gave good supporting details to support your argument.
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